快樂的朋友 发表于 2009-5-25 20:43

verygoodproud witn you

飘daniel 发表于 2009-5-27 15:35

OK, you have a grammer mistake :"in a word "not "in the word"
English is my favourite subject ,when i see a englisharticle i like read it .

danjiong 发表于 2009-5-27 15:56

You're very good!
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